Write a letter to the manager of the Lost and Found department of the railway regarding the luggage you accidentally left on the train. In your letter give the details of your train trip describe the luggage you left on the train say what actions you want him/her to take.

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dear manager, I am writing

this

letter regarding my lost luggage during my journey to Anuradhapura from Colombo yesterday. The train of Udarata Menike had been scheduled for 9 pm. Actually, the journey has begun from Jaffna and when it reached Anuradhapura, there were full of passengers. I did not have a cabin to keep my luggage,

then

I had to keep it behind the door. Because of the crowd, it slipped into my mind to get the bag when I got down. I hope it will be easier for you to recognize if I describe

the

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appearance of it .The luggage is dark red ,it has two external pockets with zippers ,very strong ,but not very heavy .It was about 10Kg with my stuff. Please be kind enough to inform me once you found it tO the number I have mentioned below .I will send one of my

friend

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who lives nearby the station to collect it.

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Until

Untill

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Until

then

keep it in a safe place

becauseIi

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because I

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have very important documents inside the bag .My contact number is 0094772860200 I am looking forward to hearing from you thank you

sincerly

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sincerely

Dulani

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The Closing

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Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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2Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
6Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

191 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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The Closing

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