Illiteracy has traditionally been viewed as largely a third world problem. However, it is becoming apparent that in countries such as USA and Australia illiteracy is on the increase. Discuss some possible causes and effects this phenomenon has on the society.
It is widely believed that
lack
of knowledge has been
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seemed
seemed
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deemed
a
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the
third
problem in the world traditionally, it is true that this
issue is increasing significantly in some countries especially
in the United state of America and Australia. The impending essay will discuss the reasons for it and will elaborate effects of it Add the comma(s)
,especially
in
the community.
There are Change preposition
on
mulitiple
reasons why Correct your spelling
multiple
lack
of literacy is one
of the main problem
in the globe and why it is increasing Change to a plural noun
problems
amoung
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among
the
American and Correct article usage
apply
Australian
. To start with, an increasing number of people in the world avoid learning environment due to high Correct your spelling
Australians
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expenses Replace the word
living
this
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which
contribute
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contributes
them
to unable pay Change preposition
to them
schools
fees because they have to pay for the rent and other bills. As a consequence, they avoid themselves and Change the noun form
school
children
from attending school. Correct pronoun usage
their children
For example
, the University of Toronto announced that in 2019 yearly tuition fees for one
semester was
almost 13000$ Correct subject-verb agreement
were
which
55% of students left Correct word choice
and
schools
. Fix the agreement mistake
school
Furthermore
, lack
of books is another major issue that resulting
in a significant effect in Wrong verb form
results
illitercay
because they are the only educational materials for learning educational programs.
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illiteracy
literacy
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of the main issue
of illiteracy Change to a plural noun
issues
on
the community is Change preposition
in
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of professionals Add an article
the graduation
a graduation
this
is because there will be few classes which in turn resulting few students in the classrooms. For instance
, the Times has announced that Texas has the fewest teachers in the entire province in America because just 100 hundred educators graduates yearly. Another negative effect of it is increasing the rate of Correct your spelling
committing
commiting
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committing
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a crime
crime
in public areas because most Fix the agreement mistake
crimes
of
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apply
the
criminals steal in order to earn money, Correct article usage
apply
As a result
, those who avoid learning
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the learning
environment
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environments
a
murder or Correct article usage
apply
thief
.
To conclude, it Fix the agreement mistake
thieves
is
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is argued
argue
that people with Wrong verb form
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lack
of learning are Correct article usage
a lack
one
of the third
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problems
problem
in the globe, Fix the agreement mistake
problems
lack
of books and high fees are the main reasons of
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for
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committing
commiting
crime and graduation of few Correct your spelling
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teacher
are the negative effect in the society.Change to a plural noun
teachers
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite