, It is irrefutable that
prefer to purchase anything that really
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from huge shopping centres,
therefore
,
causeWrong verb form
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to close a number of little local shops. In my view, there are multitudinous
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this
choice. In the following paragraphs, I shall discuss the issue in depth.
First
of all, I believe that buying from large malls is much more convenient and safe. We can locate easily the parking where it is equipped with
exactChange the word
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secure cameras which absolutely protect our vehicle and their inner means. In that case, we will buy anything that we want without anxiety and haste.
, when we go to
shoppingCorrect article usage
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centre not only can acquire
ourChange the pronoun
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necessities of our life, but
also
it could
be placeChange the verb form
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for some leisure activities like
,relaxing and eating.
Although
, there is foodcourt, coffee shops,
restaurantFix the agreement mistake
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, covered amusement and
cinemaCorrect article usage
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in these spots.
Secondly
, by buying with
this
method, we will save money and
time
. Any member of
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can obtain easily everything that they exactly ask
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such
as Clothes, shoes, bags,
, electronic
deviceFix the agreement mistake
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, toys
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etc. They go to
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together with one mean, pay for the parking and
once. Parents
instead
of
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to buy several
timeFix the agreement mistake
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and
diversCorrect your spelling
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places,
they Correct pronoun usage
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do them all at once in the shortest
time
with fewer
paymentFix the agreement mistake
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.
, there is
extremeChange the adjective
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variousReplace the word
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in commodities that gives us a chance for better selection what we want.What's more, it
motivateChange the verb form
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the sellers
forChange preposition
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competitionReplace the word
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in quality , prices and facilities. In
other wordChange the wording
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, they attempt seriously to present their products with higher
and lower cost.
In conclusion, in my opinion,
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huge Shopping centres prepare manifold facilities for Satisfaction
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customers. It helps individuals to save currency and economize
time
as well as provide
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and out of
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places for buying them with attendant family entertainment.