In recent years, many local shops have Closed because customers travel to large shopping centres or malls to do their shopping. Is this a positive or a negative development?

Thesedays

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, It is irrefutable that

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people

peeple

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people

prefer to purchase anything that really

require

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from huge shopping centres,

therefore

,

cause

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to close a number of little local shops. In my view, there are multitudinous

beneficial

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in

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this

choice. In the following paragraphs, I shall discuss the issue in depth.

First

of all, I believe that buying from large malls is much more convenient and safe. We can locate easily the parking where it is equipped with

exact

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secure cameras which absolutely protect our vehicle and their inner means. In that case, we will buy anything that we want without anxiety and haste.

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Moreover

Merever

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Moreover

, when we go to

shopping

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a shopping

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centre not only can acquire

our

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necessities of our life, but

also

it could

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for some leisure activities like

intertaining

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entertaining

,relaxing and eating.

Although

, there is foodcourt, coffee shops,

restaurant

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restaurants

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, covered amusement and

cinema

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a cinema

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in these spots.

Secondly

, by buying with

this

method, we will save money and

time

. Any member of

family

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can obtain easily everything that they exactly ask

,

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such

as Clothes, shoes, bags,

furnituers

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furniture

, electronic

device

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devices

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, toys

and

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apply

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etc. They go to

these

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lecatrin

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lecithin

together with one mean, pay for the parking and

gasolin

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gasoline

once. Parents

instead

of

go

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to buy several

time

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and

divers

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places,

they

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do them all at once in the shortest

time

with fewer

payment

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payments

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.

Thirthly

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Thirdly

, there is

extreme

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various

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in commodities that gives us a chance for better selection what we want.What's more, it

motivate

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the sellers

for

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competition

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in quality , prices and facilities. In

other word

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, they attempt seriously to present their products with higher

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quality

qauality

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quality

and lower cost. In conclusion, in my opinion,

the

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huge Shopping centres prepare manifold facilities for Satisfaction

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with

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customers. It helps individuals to save currency and economize

time

as well as provide

comfortable

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and out of

danger

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places for buying them with attendant family entertainment.