You are going for a one week vacation and your friend agreed to stay at your place while you are away. Write a letter to him/her. In your letter you should: thank him/her and tell the dates of your holiday explain how he/she enters the house describe what you expect him/her to do

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Dear Anny, Thank you so much for your offer to spend time at my house when I'll go back to my country to see my parent.I'd like to let you know that my holiday will be from 10th - 17th of March as

week. Hope you will be fine with

this

schedule.

Firstly

,I would like to tell you how to enter my place.It's a little misery but not hard. When you arrive here,you will face my trees which are in front of my house's door and turn right will have some bottles of sand placed. Please take it away and you will see my key under it.

In addition

, Could you do me a favour? It will be kind of you.If you can help me water my trees because they are the kind of plants which has to be watered every day. Hope you are happy and enjoy yourself when you stay here. Warm wishes, Maya

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