Some people think the Olympic Games are exciting and can bring nations together. Others, however, think that it is a waste of money. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
Some are of the view that the
Olympics
Use synonyms
are astonishing and can bring countries to
common
Add an article
the common
show examples
ground whereas others think
its
Correct your spelling
it's
show examples
a decay of finances. While the games
itself
Correct pronoun usage
themselves
show examples
have opportunities for individuals
it
Correct pronoun usage
they
show examples
can be a paradise for fraud and mismanagement. The
Olympics
Use synonyms
is the only stage where
Use synonyms
world's
Correct article usage
the world's
show examples
top athletes compete for supremacy.
To begin
Linking Words
,with
this
Linking Words
helps athletes around the
world
Use synonyms
come together, and show their talents to the
world
Use synonyms
.
Secondly
Linking Words
, it gives an opportunity to nations around the
world
Use synonyms
to put their differences aside and come together. As an example, the
world
Use synonyms
,war two
Olympics
Use synonyms
pave the way to a ceasefire conduct the event which was the climax of the century.
Finally
Linking Words
, the game will help to increase camaraderie among athletes and share their experiences and learn from each other.
On the contrary
Linking Words
, at the hands of the wrong ,authorities it can have detrimental effects
to
Change preposition
on
show examples
the economy.
Firstly
Linking Words
, conducting an event of
such
Linking Words
magnitude requires millions of dollars to be spent in a short period of time.
For instance
Linking Words
, in 2016 Brazil hosted the
Olympics
Use synonyms
and invested billions in the improvement of infrastructure in the country,
nevertheless
Linking Words
right after the game's country went
in
Change preposition
into
show examples
a debt trap resulting
an
Change preposition
in an
show examples
economic collapse.
In addition
Linking Words
to
this
Linking Words
, a report issued by the IMF showcased the extent public funds were misused by the government without any understanding of the repercussions. In conclusion,
although
Linking Words
conducting
Olympics
Use synonyms
in a country where transparency and rule of law
is
Change the verb form
are
show examples
upheld can be a success, it will have devastating effects
to
Change preposition
on
show examples
countries
who
Correct pronoun usage
that
show examples
are unable to invest money
to
Change preposition
in
show examples
the event accurately resulting in bankruptcy
. .
Replace the punctuation
.
...
show examples
Submitted by madonnasama on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Your opinion

Don’t put your opinion unless you are asked to give it.

If the question asks what you think, you MUST give your opinion to get a good score.

Don’t leave your opinion until the conclusion.

Here are examples of instructions that require you to give your opinion:

...do you agree or disagree?...do you think...?...your opinion...?

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

What to do next:
Look at other essays: