Your photograph recently won a photography competition and will be shown in an exhibition. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter describe the photograph you sent to the competition tell him/her about the exhibition where your photo will be shown invite him/her to the exhibition

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Dear Javid, I am just writing with respect to my photo that was selected as the best photograph in a photography competition.

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,It is going to be exhibited next month. I would like to give an explanation about my photograph that was taken in the Philippines during my journey.It shows the islands,mountains and forests in one portrait.They give a special beauty to the photo. I would like to let you know that the exhibition centre is located in the suburb near the Baku Malls where my photo will be depicted.The exhibition hall is seen from various parts of the city,

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, you will find it without hardship. I would be grateful if you accept my kind invitation.I know that you are passionate about strange and beautiful photos

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I firmly believe that it would be great not only for me but

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for you to come and attend. I am looking forward to catching up with you soon. Sincerely Malik Maliki.

Submitted by malikli.malik1995 on Sat Nov 05 2022

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Please ensure that you fully address all parts of the task and provide clear and detailed information about the photograph and the exhibition.

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Work on using more appropriate linking words and cohesive devices to improve the overall coherence and cohesion of the letter.

lexical resource

Expand your range of vocabulary and use more precise and descriptive language to enhance the lexical resource of the letter.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

159 words

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