Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?
It is a common phenomenon that some
children
are getting obsessed with their smartphones
nowadays. In my opinion, it should arouse more concern because it is definitely harmful to young people and there are a variety of reasons towards this
.
There are three main aspects for us to conduct the courses. To start with the parents, many parents are not as responsible as they should be. Some of them who are busy with work are
likely to throw a smartphone at their Change the verb form
is
children
, leaving them watching
cartoons to make them quiet. Change the verb form
to watch
Then
, it is required in schools to accomplish homework or activities by using smartphones
. Thus
they offer access to mobile phone
for Fix the agreement mistake
phones
children
. Nevertheless
, smartphones
are indeed popular in today's society. Children
could watch videoes, play games, communicate with their friends and search information
online through Change preposition
for information
smartphones
. Life could be less colourful and inconvenient if one does not equipped
with a handset.
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equip
However
, relying too much on smartphones
could be devastating for young people. Firstly
, it will do harm to children
's eyes if they watch digital screens for hours and hours consistently. It is no wonder now there are an increasing number of children
who are short-sighted from kindergarten. Secondly
, spending time on smartphones
and communicating with others online without face-to-face may damage children
's social abilities, which will affect them in a long run. Thirdly
, young children
who are exposed overly to the internet tend to become more influenced by KOLs and celebrities. For instance
, some of them may care about fashion, outfits and makeup far more than their school works, even dropping out of school.
In conclusion, parents, education systems and society should take their responsibilities together to protect children
from over usage of smartphones
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