In many countries, the costs of living are rising. What are the effects of this on individuals and society? Suggest solutions to this problem.

Due to fragile economical issues that
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to the world in recent decades, we can see the results in the quality of
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fighting with countries who are enemies are definitely wrong. I believed
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most nations,
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of good managing tough moments
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a country.
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some neighbours who start
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with each other for energy resources like Gas and try to boycott
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of behaviours just can
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people
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of nations is the best way ever can make the area calm and fat cat. Actually, conservation of
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them far from any concerns, makes their life
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better, at that moment individuals will appreciate
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their government and pray for
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countries, Norway as an example. The sound of unity
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couple of years ago, there is no poor, there is no
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lack of job opportunities and there is no
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concern about their lives. In conclusion, I wish a day
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soon for every single of us to live
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the moment without any
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • disposable income
  • leisure activities
  • inflation
  • exacerbate
  • inequality
  • social tensions
  • mental health issues
  • social welfare programs
  • purchasing power
  • tax incentives
  • subsidies
  • affordable housing
  • budgeting
  • financial literacy
  • mitigate
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