In many countries, the costs of living are rising. What are the effects of this on individuals and society? Suggest solutions to this problem.

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to the world in recent decades, we can see the results in the quality of

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living. Some domestic problems or

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fighting with countries who are enemies are definitely wrong. I believed

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worth it to stop arguing with other governments and pay attention to their

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a country.

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with each other for energy resources like Gas and try to boycott

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of nations is the best way ever can make the area calm and fat cat. Actually, conservation of

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them far from any concerns, makes their life

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better, at that moment individuals will appreciate

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their government and pray for

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soon for every single of us to live

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the moment without any

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Topic Vocabulary:

disposable income
leisure activities
inflation
exacerbate
inequality
social tensions
mental health issues
social welfare programs
purchasing power
tax incentives
subsidies
affordable housing
budgeting
financial literacy
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