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Because many problems we face today affect our whole planet, good relationships between countries are becoming more important than ever before. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

#face #planet #relationships #countries
These days many
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problems
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the problems
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 ,
which
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we face are global
problems
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they
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they
 have an effect
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whole
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 world. There are
therefore
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 it is of the utmost importance that countries have
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 relationship with each other.
To begin
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the
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variety
veriety
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variety
 of
problems
as
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such as
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 drought ,
deforastration
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deforestation
 , contamination and so on.
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Unfortunately
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Unfortunately
, the number of acute
problems
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accelareting
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accelerating
 speed.
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,
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countries
countrues
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countries
 should unite with each other
than
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 ever before .The relationship among countries
have
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 to consolidate , so they can tackle
such
problems
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instance
instanse
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instance
, in 2009 the famous actress Gisel
Bunchen
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Bundchen
 motivated her colleagues to halt
deforastration
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deforestation
 .
Cosequently
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Consequently
, they cooperate with each other and assist her to modify cutting trees in Brazil.
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 she spent millions of dollars to support
the
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nature .
Otherwise
 , it would be
devastatly
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devastating
devastatingly
 dry , as
government
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the government
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 could not overcome
this
 problem. The secondary problem is that ,
producing
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weapons
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of weapons
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are
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 increasing day by
days
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.
Hence
, all humanity would be dead , by
misseles
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missiles
.
However
 , people who are producing
misseles
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missiles
 do not reckon about
this
. Recently , Vladimir Putin who is the president of
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the Russia
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Russia
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Russian
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 Federation has given his opinion about it . It sounds like "The relationship among countries
are
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crucial
crusial
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crucial
, as they don't support each other". To conclude,
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,
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there are global issues
in
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 our planet with promotion and cooperation , the majority of
problems
 could be tackled
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