Interviews form the basic selection criteria for most large companies. However, some poeple think that interviews is not a reliable mthod of choosing whom to employ and there are other better methods. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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For a very long time,
interviews
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are the most common and spread method of selection at almost all companies.
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, many people believe that
interviews
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are not
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and appropriate way to select employees, and there are other better methods to choose them. I tend to trust traditional and tested methods everywhere, so I disagree with
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those
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who dislike the interview method. Because
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there are several factors which confirm that
interviews
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are reliable.
Firstly
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, it is proven that at
interviews
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,
interviewer
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the interviewer
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can check not only
technical
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the technical
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knowledge of
employee
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the employee
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, but
also
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his communication skills, stress tolerance, and his suitability for
company
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the company
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. Because
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interviewer
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the interviewer
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can do anything,
for instance
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: give
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, questions or just have a conversation with
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an employee
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. It fully reveals
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a person
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and allows
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us to
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find out all the necessary qualities.
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,
interview
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the interview
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may not show the all skills of
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the employee
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, but a lot of companies conduct an internship after
interview
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the interview
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, where
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the company
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fully understand is the person appropriate for them.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • interpersonal skills
  • communication abilities
  • bias
  • assessment centers
  • psychometric testing
  • peer assessments
  • first impressions
  • discrimination
  • competence
  • reliable
  • selection criteria
  • holistic
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