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In many countries today, crimes novels and TV crimes dramas are becoming more and more popular. Why do you think these books and TV show are popular? What is your opinion of crime fiction and TV crime dramas?

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Crime
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 fiction and television
series
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 are garnering worldwide popularity. People are hooked
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crime
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content
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 because they have an element of surprise and twist;
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, I feel that
crime
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 fiction and TV drama disturb the mind and should be avoided. Books and television
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 of the
crime
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 genre
have
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 become an addictive
choice
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choices
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 for the masses. Entertainment providers or book authors ensure that they fill their
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 with surprises,
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 action, and unexpected twists in the story.
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 keeps the audience engaged and wanting for the
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 episode of the
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 or the
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 book.
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, deep down the entertainment industry understands the psychology of
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 mind which always seeks novelty / suspense.
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, the Game of
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series
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 has become very popular amongst old and young because of its strong characters and unexpected twists in the plot.
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 popularity of
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 fiction, in my opinion, is detrimental to the readers or audience. People spend endless hours consuming
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content
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 through reading or watching
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, but in the
end
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 their mind is left with disturbing images, and an addiction to
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the dopamine
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 rush that
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content
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 brings. Especially for
kids
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 it is very very harmful
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 which can lead to wrong choices early in life. To illustrate, a study published by Stanford psychological department states that because of
crime
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 books and TV
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 kids are exposed to at least 180 murder scenes by the age of sixteen. In conclusion,
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crime
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 books and TV episodes are gaining huge entertainment popularity in recent times, I think
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 should be avoided as much as possible and children must certainly stay away from it.
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