In many countries paying for things using mobile phones( cellphones) apps is becoming increasingly common. Does this development have more advantages or more disatvantages?
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people
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, many applications
and brands now have an online discount or coupon system which is specifically for shopping online, hence
, people generally admire this
gesture. In addition
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products
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use
the online payment
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apply
payment
applications
like PayTM and Paypal which are not even safe but also
quite easy to use
and efficient.
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do not
on
paying online, our data can easily be leaked and Change preposition
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hence
misused by someone. Secondly
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our
payment
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