A large number of
children
devote lots of their
time
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their high-tech cell
phones
every day. I think they
use
to do
this
, since they do not have appropriate activities to
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their spare
time
and
furthermore
, as they are alone.
Thus
, I believe that definitely it is a negative development.
These days. We
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significant number of nuclear families, who have only one child and due to the economic
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of the majority of society, both parents have to work full-
time
. To illustrate, imagine an 8-year-old boy, who does have any sisters or brothers; he comes back home from school and there is no one at home.
Therefore
, he uses his phone to communicate with other individuals, his relatives or friends.
On the other hand
, the limited space of the apartment,
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him to do some games on his phone,
instead
of doing some activities which need more space like playing with a ball.
Hence
,
children
use
their high-tech gadgets for various reasons, like solitary and limited space.
On the other side of the coin, spending a significant
time
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modern cell
phones
, have several negative consequences.
Firstly
,
children
sit or lay down and
use
their mobile
phones
, according to the common poor nutrition diet of the
children
, with
this
passive lifestyle,
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has negative effects on their health and may cause obesity in some cases.
Secondly
, they
use
to spend their
time
on their gadgets and do not talk to their parents or other
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.
This
lack of communication, will
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negative impacts on their social skills. And
finally
, parents do not have any control
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the contents that their
children
see
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their
phones
. In some age
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it can be harmful
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children
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since social media is full of violence or sexual content, which a little kid should face at its true
time
.
In conclusion, I believe that
children
use
their smartphones more and more
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since they do not have enough people around them to spend their
time
with them and
also
they live in small apartments, which cannot do some physical activities there.
This
phenomenon has various negative impacts on the
children
,
such
as health problems, lack of social skills and
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content.