A large number of
devote lots of their
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their high-tech cell
every day. I think they
to do
, since they do not have appropriate activities to
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their spare
and
, as they are alone.
, I believe that definitely it is a negative development.
These days. We
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significant number of nuclear families, who have only one child and due to the economic
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of the majority of society, both parents have to work full-
. To illustrate, imagine an 8-year-old boy, who does have any sisters or brothers; he comes back home from school and there is no one at home.
, he uses his phone to communicate with other individuals, his relatives or friends.
, the limited space of the apartment,
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him to do some games on his phone,
of doing some activities which need more space like playing with a ball.
,
their high-tech gadgets for various reasons, like solitary and limited space.
On the other side of the coin, spending a significant
on
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modern cell
, have several negative consequences.
,
sit or lay down and
their mobile
, according to the common poor nutrition diet of the
, with
passive lifestyle,
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has negative effects on their health and may cause obesity in some cases.
, they
to spend their
on their gadgets and do not talk to their parents or other
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.
lack of communication, will
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negative impacts on their social skills. And
, parents do not have any control
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the contents that their
see
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their
. In some age
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it can be harmful
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since social media is full of violence or sexual content, which a little kid should face at its true
.
In conclusion, I believe that
their smartphones more and more
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since they do not have enough people around them to spend their
with them and
they live in small apartments, which cannot do some physical activities there.
phenomenon has various negative impacts on the
,
as health problems, lack of social skills and
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content.