Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion?
It is argued by some that the major environmental problem at the moment is the
loss
of particular Use synonyms
species
of Use synonyms
plants
and Use synonyms
animals
, while others say that there are other significant environmental Use synonyms
problems
. I believe that while the Use synonyms
loss
of particular Use synonyms
species
of Use synonyms
plants
and Use synonyms
animals
can disrupt the Use synonyms
food
chain, Use synonyms
climate
Use synonyms
change
and Use synonyms
deforestation
are the major environmental Use synonyms
problems
.
Some argue that the Use synonyms
loss
of a particular Use synonyms
species
of Use synonyms
plants
and Use synonyms
animals
is the main environmental threat because it disrupts the Use synonyms
food
chain. Use synonyms
That is
to say, certain Linking Words
plants
are a Use synonyms
food
source for particular Use synonyms
animals
, Use synonyms
therefore
, the Linking Words
loss
of these Use synonyms
plants
has an impact on the particular animal who relied on them as a Use synonyms
food
source. Use synonyms
For example
, in Australia, grassroots declined in its number after a wildfire in 2015 burnt leaves of grass which was a Linking Words
food
source for it.
Others say that Use synonyms
climate
Use synonyms
change
and Use synonyms
deforestation
are more important environmental Use synonyms
problems
. Use synonyms
That is
to say that due to Linking Words
climate
Use synonyms
change
the sea level is increasing and many cities would be submerged, Use synonyms
therefore
, many communities living along the coast will be forced to migrate to save places. Linking Words
Deforestation
is another environmental problem because trees absorb approximately 70% of carbon dioxide from human activities, Use synonyms
therefore
, cutting these trees would accelerate the amount of carbon dioxide we emit into the atmosphere which would have bad consequences. Linking Words
For instance
, Australia contributed double the amount of emissions they released into the atmosphere in 2015 due to the Linking Words
loss
of 1 million hectares of forest which is burnt into ashes by a wildfire. For Use synonyms
this
reason, I believe that Linking Words
climate
Use synonyms
change
and Use synonyms
deforestation
are the major environmental Use synonyms
problems
.
In conclusion, Use synonyms
although
the Linking Words
loss
of certain Use synonyms
species
of flora and fauna can disrupt the Use synonyms
food
chain, I believe that Use synonyms
climate
Use synonyms
change
and Use synonyms
deforestation
are the major environmental Use synonyms
problems
.Use synonyms
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite