Mrs. Barrett, an English-speaking woman who lives in your town, has advertised for someone to help her in her home for a few hours a day next summer. write a letter to Mrs. barrettes your letter suggest how you could help her in her home Say why you would like to do this work Explain when you will and will not be available

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Dear Mrs Barrett, I am Nikhil Dhaygude and I am writing

this

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letter in response to the advertisement requiring assistance in your house

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summer.

To begin

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with, I have excellent organisational skills.

Therefore

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, if there is any furniture or kitchen item movement, I will be very good at keeping it tidy with minimum effort spent. I have

also

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been known to have excellent problem-solving skills and routinely solve electrical and mechanical problems at my home.

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, I find doing

such

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work physically exhilarating and satisfying.

Also

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, I would like to spend my summer doing something productive and learning something new.

However

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, I want to inform you that I have enrolled in piano lessons for the entire summer. As the classes are in the morning between 8:00 AM and 11:00 AM, I will be unavailable during

this

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period.

Otherwise

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, I will be at your disposal for the rest of the day. I sincerely hope you consider me suitable and hear from you soon. Yours sincerely, Nikhil Dhaygude.

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

167 words

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