In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of diverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages.

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as cars and trams will be automated; only commuters would be travelling inside the vehicles. I mostly agree with

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statement following two reasons that are given in below. On the one hand,

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may help to reduce the number of

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accidents which is due to human errors because some people do not obey the traffic law. Apart from

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, self-automation

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for old age and

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people, who can travel safer. Another advantage of automation,

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would be saving

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work and they can do the work they want

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activities.

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cars and trams would more safety as compared with

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drive

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for example

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when some

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take

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during

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travel, they are unconscious.

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react quickly when any obstacle ahead and something

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passed careless passengers and animals.

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, some demerits will happen

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vehicle is more expensive and

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require lots of maintenance

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annual

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that shows as annoying and expensive. Sometimes, software and technical problems happen in

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and sometimes, when vehicles are out of electricity

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cause

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delay

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trip and users wait until it will not

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charged. Another con is unemployment because when

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would more in future the reduced amount of

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market

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and

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loss

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job so

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causes unemployment.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

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Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

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Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

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In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of diverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages.

Include an introduction and conclusion

It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Research shows that business meetings, discussions and training are happening online nowadays. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is better to use printed materials such as books and articles to do research than it is to use the Internet. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

In many countries, the government prioritizes economic growth above all other concerns. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this.

In certain countries, unemployment is so high that some have suggested children should stop their education after primary school to learn skills necessary to join the workforce. Do you agree or disagree?