Teleworking has been on the increase in recent years. Do you think this is a negative or postive development ?

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option of remote working has significantly increased. While some believe that it has greater advantages while others argue that it has many side effects. In
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essay, I would support the view of the positive impacts of increased remote working opportunities and will share some examples associated with it.
Firstly
, Teleworking avoids
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of
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and enables
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focus more on core
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. To clarify, situations during
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proved that productivity in most
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organisations
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organisations
has
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significantly
signifcantly
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significantly
increased due to forced remote working policies.
For instance
, IT Employees and sales
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professional
professionsl
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able to focus more on
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delivarables
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deliverables
and targets rather than wasting time
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daily commutes and gossiping in
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.
On the other hand
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attemps
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remote work to regular office patterns has resulted in decreased productivity and increased attrition rates. Remote working concepts
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facilitates
faciliates
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Increased prospects of job and hiring opportunities for both job seekers and organisations.
In other words
,
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eases the hunting of better talent pools
otherwise
it would have
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difficlut
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to hire locally for employers and
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enables
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work for dream companies by its aspirants without relocating from
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base locations.
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such
as IT,
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Engineering
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are encouraging
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candidates to work remotely to attract better talents globally.
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will create a
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situation for both employers and employees. To Conclude, I am
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supporter of
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organsiations
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promoting remote
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considering its great number of advantages
such
as better
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opportunities
opprtunities
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opportunities
, increased productivity etc,
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, an exception should be made for special profiles which
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physical presence
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important and no viable remote
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alternatives.
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