You have just an article in a national newspaper which claims that town centres in your country all look very similar to each other you don't fully agree with this opinion Write a letter to the editor of the newspaper in your letter say which points in the article you about explain ways in which year Town Centre is different from most other towns centres offer to give a guided tour of your Town Centre to the writer of the article

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Dear Sir, My name is Gurmit Singh. I am writing

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letter to draw your immediate attention toward your printed article in 'The Hindu' newspaper about the town centres of our nation. Point number five in your article described that all the structures of city centres are similar across the country.

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, the shape and township of all towns might be the same on a national level, while, the details given by you about the design of the buildings are not acceptable to me.

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, these were constructed during the British rule over our communities and the material they brought from other nations,

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, the architectural design seemed different from each other. I would like to invite you to visit my region so that you can get deep details about the town centre infrastructure. I hope it will you to enhance your historical knowledge which will be beneficial to you in future. I am looking forward to your prompt reply. Your's faithfully

Submitted by gurmit.150 on Sat Nov 05 2022

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