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Some universities deduct students’ marks if work is given late. What is your opinion and recommend some alternative actions for this problem?

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Nowadays some educational institutions use a method which is deducting
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 due to some reasons
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 as giving their work late, While
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 method could be active in many cases, and I partly agree with
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, it is
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 and true that all
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, they already have a schedule to go with, each subject they study has a timetable, beginning and ending.
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, the criteria of discipline and
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 if their work is given late is active to urge
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 to respect
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the studying
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 process
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overall
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over all
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,
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evaluation
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, the top
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 to achieve the full mark.
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, the others will try to get any
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universities
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especially
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 for giving their
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 late, I recommend some alternatives for
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 method in some subjects which are already hard in studying, because these might take a long
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 they would have enough
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 to get their works done.
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' excuses for being late and
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 have both positive and negative side, but overall, it is an active way and it has proven successful before
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