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Compare the advantages of three of the following as media for communicating information. State which you consider to be the most effective.

#three #media #information
Date November 8,2022 Reviewer:Reem al harbi Article Citation (APA): Uyar, B.S., Polat, R., Bolat, M. and Donmez, A. (2021). ‘ Which is good for pre-operative anxiety? Midazolam, video games or teaching with cartoons: a randomised trial’ . European journal of anaesthesiology, 38(7), pp.744–750. PICOT Question:In paediatric patients ( P ) , how does video games and watching cartoons( I ) compared to midazolam ( C ) affect on level of anxiety ( O ) within Pre operative period ( T) . Overview/General Description of
Study
 Purpose of
Study
: The purpose of
this
study
 is to explore what is the most effective method to decrease preoperative anxiety level in children. It will compare between using a video game, watching informative cartoons on the television and administering midazolam as the gold standard for doing so. •
Study
 Design: A prospective randomized trial. •
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