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Some universities deduct students’ marks if work is given late. What is your opinion and recommend some alternative actions for this problem?

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Nowadays, underscoring assignments on late submissions has become
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 trend among educational institutions. No doubt, it is nice
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 to evaluate their
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ability
ablitity
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ability
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time line
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.
However
,
this
 method is not good for all situations . My experience of life
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 me to agree with the
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 opinion.
First
 of all , the reason that makes me understand the importance of reducing marks on the late handover of the project is disciplined.
For instance
 , if there will be no fixed
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deadline
then
 there will be no end
time
 to submit the final work.
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 phenomena cause chaos in
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class learning .
On the other hand
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time
 a very rigid approach can not be adopted for different situations for
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 reduction of the marks . There should be some incidents
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 should
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and
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 after that decision can be made . To epitome, suddenly student ' s mother fall sick and at that
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time
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 he has to drop his work on the portal
then
 , what action will be performed
first
?
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 he will take his mom to
hospital
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 to save her life. So, all
time
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 some
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 universities can not be so rigid
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and disciplined they should be provided
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strict
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 as well as
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 of
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time
 limit.
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