 For centuries, important parts of education have remained such as reading, writing and math. With the advent of computers, some people think that computer skill be made as a fourth skill to be added to the list. To what extent do you agree?

Reading, writing and math have always been the main parts of education for many years. Nowadays, new technologies play a valuable role in our lives. Many people think that

computer

skills

can be added to the necessary part of education. In my opinion,

this

is a great idea and I absolutely agree with

this

statement.

Firstly

, my essay will discuss

advantages

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of using computers.

Secondly

, it will discuss the fact that a lot of jobs are related to laptops. On the one hand, computers have become a huge part of our everyday life as almost everything can be done with just one click. Having

skills

in computing can help

a

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apply

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students with navigating on the internet and researching answers to their questions.

Also

,

data

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processor

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processors

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can be useful for studying, shopping, watching movies, etc. Technology has helped thousands of people to

booking

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book

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hotels and attractions.

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, in the past, if you needed information, you would find a book and read it, but now, just after some

clicks

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you may find everything

what

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you need.

On the other hand

, almost every job needs a

computer

in one way or another in order to complete everyday tasks.

Therefore

, knowing how to use a

computer

skill that most workplaces will require their employees to have.

For instance

,

civil

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the civil

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engineer needs a strong laptop for some apps like AutoCAD,

Revit

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and Revit

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. They cannot work without new technologies and knowledge of

skills

. Computing

machine

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machines

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also

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are also

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used

to

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for

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services in some workplaces, like tour agencies,

hospitals

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and hospitals

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. In conclusion, adding

computer

skills

in

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to

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education

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the education

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system is

awesome

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an awesome

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idea. I believe that

this

innovation will help to develop

individuals

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individuals'

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lives progress.