Many offenders commit more crimes after serving their first punishment. Why is this happening, and what measures can be taken to tackle this problem?

There is no doubt, that

crimes

Use synonyms

are

the

Correct article usage

a

show examples

global

issue

Use synonyms

nowadays. Lots of cases of breaking the law are investigated every year from all over the world.

Therefore

Linking Words

the problem of the increasing amount of

crimes

Use synonyms

after the punishment

being

Wrong verb form

is

show examples

served was noticed. The

first

Linking Words

cause

Use synonyms

of

this

Linking Words

issue

Use synonyms

is that depressing

conditions

Use synonyms

and strict rules in prisons where lawbreakers are being held make them feel humiliated. It might

cause

Use synonyms

new

crimes

Use synonyms

in order to relieve the urge to

the

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

protest. To solve

this

Linking Words

problem, organisations should teach prisoners how to behave properly and not

to

Change preposition

apply

show examples

just isolate them. The

second

Linking Words

reason

of

Change preposition

for

show examples

the crime

issue

Use synonyms

is that punishment may not be strict enough for the rule breakers.

For instance

Linking Words

, there are fines for drivers who

cause

Use synonyms

car accidents because of alcohol, but they

does

Change the verb form

do

show examples

not stop people.

Therefore

Linking Words

the solution might be found in increasing the fine rates or even

forbidding

Change the form of the verb

forbidden

show examples

to drive again. Another

cause

Use synonyms

is

about

Change preposition

apply

show examples

the

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

psychological disorders.

For example

Linking Words

, some thieves or murderers cannot stop making

crimes

Use synonyms

after

the

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

punishment or prison.

This

Linking Words

happens because of some brain traumas or mental illnesses. To tackle

this

Linking Words

issue

Use synonyms

dangerous people should be treated by professionals and held in specialised

conditions

Use synonyms

. To put it in a

nutshellnut

Correct your spelling

nutshell not

nutshell nut

shell, increasing crime rates are undoubtedly one of the main

problem

Change to a plural noun

problems

show examples

of the modern world.

This

Linking Words

issue

Use synonyms

has several causes like prison

conditions

Use synonyms

, too weak

restricts

Replace the word

restrictions

show examples

or mental disorders of crime makers. There are

also

Linking Words

some solutions: changing prison

conditions

Use synonyms

, increasing fines and supervising dangerous prisoners. From my point of view,

responsibility

Add an article

the responsibility

show examples

of

Change preposition

for

show examples

the solution is on the government's shoulders in order to provide safety for society.