Reporting of crimes and other kinds of violent news on television and in newspapers can have adverse consquences. This kind of information should be restricted from being shown in the media. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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crimes and other kinds

is

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shown

in

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television and

newspapers

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in newspapers

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. The question is, what do you think about the crimes shown

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television is a dangerous for

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teenagers and kids? In the essay,I am going to discuss both views and draw my own conclusion. In terms of problems, I think it is dangerous for all

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ages because the child doesn’t know and maybe

want

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to try what they see. The main reason given to

supports

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this

claim

that

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the

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children

not

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all the time watch the television or newspapers so they some games

in

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the computer or mobile phone it is more dangerous for how they think or learn the kid something bad

,

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must be watched the teenagers and

children

all the time what they play or watch,To illustrate, should the news only take about the crime and

don’t

show the photos or videos in the media and newspapers and the adults need to see they

kids

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phone and talk with him to learn our

children

about the peace.

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don’t

let the

children

show

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you the news and

don’t

scare them, Teach them to forgive. In conclusion,

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learning is the important thing focus

about

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the

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peace and exercise

don’t

let them watch

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horror movies

moreover

,

i

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believe that always make conversation with teenagers and

children

stay close and make them comfortable and tell their

story

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about friendship and forgiveness , try to learn they something new, so the crimes and other kinds

is

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so dangerous about how they think we need to stop showing

this

thing even horror films.