Some people think that introducing new technology can improve people's quality of life in the developing countries. However, others believe that free education should be offered. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

Technology is evolving very fast these days.

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, we see new technologies being introduced that can help in improving

quality

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of people's life.

Furthermore

,

education

plays a very important role in the development of new technologies. In my opinion,

education

should be accessible to anyone who is  willing to acquire it. I agree technology plays an important part in everyone's lives these days.

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, using

the

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google map you find ways to reach your destination.

Besides

the

applications

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these days help to book a cab. There is no dependency on any family member or friends for you to reach anywhere. The newly developed

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software

softwares

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software

and machines help us in carrying out our day-to-day jobs easily without much too

physical

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activity.

However

,

education

is the backbone of any developing county. Getting educated is the right of every individual and should be provided freely to them. It can be argued that

this

would cost a lot to the government. So free

education

could be provided until a certain level. But higher

education

also

should be made available to every student aspiring

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it.

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, children who are intelligent but cannot afford higher studies

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should be given scholarships to make sure they achieve their dreams. At the same time,

this

would help the nation to develop. To conclude, technology should be used in an appropriate manner to make our lives easy.

On the other hand

, using it

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excessively

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can be harmful. We should not be entirely dependent on it.

Also

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education

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eduction

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education

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should be made available to everyone who wants to have it.