Health awareness had drastically increased over the years.
However
,
this
realisation has come with the alarming surge of diseases. While many
people
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they should be responsible for their own health others believes it is the
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duty to do it. In the following
I will discuss both of the views and explain with good
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behind
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.
Firstly
every individual has free will and they should not be forced to do anything. Requirements
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the healthier
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can not be suitable for everyone because
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may be too hard to apply.
For
choosing not to smoke might be great for
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but some
people
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enjoy the moment rather than long-term health benefits. Since society members are free to do anything, nothing should be forced upon them.
On the other hand
,
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can promote healthier living. Authorities
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the power
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peoples’ behaviour
such
as
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free gym memberships,
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pools for folks or
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organic food for schoolchildren. With
this
kind of
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people
will be more encouraged to choose the right option for their good.
To sum up, I believe each person’s life and decisions
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in their own control,
on the contrary
governments might
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laws and offer benefits to the populace to encourage
people
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to better. I think both of them need to play
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themselves and society.