In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

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In the modern technological world,
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vehicles
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is
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a well-discussed topic. and buses, trucks and
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will be
driverless
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in the future.
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, If individuals drove
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, they would be just passengers.
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there are many superb benefits of
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without human resources, but I suppose it is fair to say that one of the major advantages would be economical reasons.
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, public transportations
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as
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buses are cheaper than others because of low costs without
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salaries.
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, the other
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would be safety. It is advisable to use
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vehicles because
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would be controlled by suitable
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for various vehicles
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as buses trucks and all
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can be seen as
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trains in Japan, which are
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than other
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.
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, there are would be imperative problems
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subject.
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of all, most citizens tend to drive
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their private
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. Due to the interesting side of driving as
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entertainment.
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, most
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trucks
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drivers are in love with their job and they will stay in that position in the future. The
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reason is individuals which have technophobia.
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, they cannot use
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cars
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can be seen as elders, they would afraid
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new technological gadgets and prefer to drive their
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. In conclusion, it seems there are more beneficial features of
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cars
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across from disadvantages.
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, it will be
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that citizens
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these
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in the future.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • driverless vehicles
  • advantages
  • disadvantages
  • increased safety
  • reduced traffic congestion
  • improved efficiency
  • accessibility
  • disabled
  • elderly
  • job displacement
  • privacy concerns
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