In some nations, an increasing number of young
continue to live with their
until they graduated and get a job.
there are a number of benefits of
trend, I am of the opinion that the drawbacks are greater.
On the one hand,
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can be highly beneficial for many reasons. One of the key advantages is that it helps youngsters
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not
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about
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of living standard.
, they do not pay for
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,
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when they live with their
.
, they prefer living with lovers to
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far from their
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. Another
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is that young
could spend more time
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their
. It is because they have time to take care of their lovers and create many memories together.
,they get
things and make their life better.
, I would argue that the disadvantages outweigh the advantages.
,youngsters would not be independent. The reason is that
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they could depend on others and do not want to do anything by themselves.
,After class ,their
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meals already and
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them do housework.
can lead to
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that
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would be more
.
, when living with
, young
would be limited
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effort. It is because they do not bear the
for expenses so they do not want to earn money and create
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difficulties in life.
,
trend might affect
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their career.It is because,young adults do not enhance necessary
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like pressure work,
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importance of
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a relationship
the relationship
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with others so they could face hindrances in their career path.
In conclusion, despite several benefits
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young
continue living with their
after
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and finding jobs. It
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to me that the drawbacks are weightier than
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.