In many countries, more and more young people are leaving school but unable to find jobs. What problems do you think youth unemployment causes for individuals and the society? What measures should be taken to reduce the level of unemployment among youngsters?

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of countries,

increasingly

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students

are giving up schools which cannot attain well-pay jobs and

for

this

reason; there are some

problems

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this

issue. I think that it can

causes

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negative effects

for

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young

people

and

the

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society

such

as psychological diseases and

skill

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workers immigration.

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essay will explain

this

issue. Youth

unemployment

is one of the most important

problems

in the world.

Firstly

, when

students

graduate from university, they try to achieve a good job

according to

their knowledge and habits. If they cannot find

job

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, they may

involve

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to

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in

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psychological illnesses

such

as depression and low self-confidence which

causes

they

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them

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use

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drugs; naturally, drugs have bad effects on

person's

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a person's

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treatment and health. I believe that when

society

may involve lots of junkies, they may make serious

problems

in

society

likes

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stealing which

causes

unsafe for

people

.

In addition

, when

youngsters

cannot work they decide to

immigration

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immigrate

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to other countries because they can find well-pay

job

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jobs

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and earn money.

For

this

reason,

society

is

threated

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threatened

treated

with

lack

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a lack

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of

skill

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skilled

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workers in the future which

due

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to youth

unemployment

immigration. On the bright side, I think that

governments

should support young

people

for decreasing

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to decrease

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the unemployment's

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unemployment's

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unemployment

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rate.

For example

, annually, a number of

people

retire from their offices,

governments

can absorb

students

without interview which graduated from university with high

score

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scores

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, and

then

governments

should

be

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train them. they start to work

instead

of retirements.

Moreover

,

governments

can predict

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requirements of

society

.

Hence

, they held courses

according to

prediction and when

students

train and pass courses,

governments

can allocate a loan which young

people

can establish their business. For

this

reason, not only

youngsters

encourage

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to work and earn money but

also

help to save human resources and provide requirements of

society

. In conclusion,

unemployment

always is one of the most important issues in every country which

causes

serious

problems

for individuals and

society

such

as mental diseases and migration.

Hence

,

governments

need to find

best

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solution to resolve these

problems

which in my opinion, hiring young

people

and training them

instead

of

retirements

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retirees

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and

also

allocating budgets for

establish

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establishing

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youngsters

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business

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businesses

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are good solutions for

reduce

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reducing

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youngsters

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unemployment

.