In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless.The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

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could drive themselves without
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in the future. In
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of
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is that there could not be any traffic congestion in the
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future. Because of
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, have been checking on the roads.
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the information in more detail, we can see that there are a lot of traffic
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in many countries.
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,
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as much better as
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within people. A
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is that buses, trucks, and others will
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work in one specific program.
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roads. In fact, these days, almost all states have crushing statistics in their territories. Turning to the
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gas or another fuel.
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people rather than
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. Due to the fact that the electricity and other resources are limited. A
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of the argument is that when the system will work
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, many people could be unemployed at that time.
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number of families
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less well-off life. To conclude, the traffic jams will decrease gradually when the
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will be driverless begin to work on the roads. I completely agree
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only
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and consider that there are many benefits
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the disadvantages.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • driverless vehicles
  • advantages
  • disadvantages
  • increased safety
  • reduced traffic congestion
  • improved efficiency
  • accessibility
  • disabled
  • elderly
  • job displacement
  • privacy concerns
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