Increasing travels between countries enable people to learn different cultures or to increase tension between people from different countries?

Whether or not expanding tourism overseas is beneficial is a heated issue since contemporary transportation has materialized
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abroad for centuries. Some argue that
such
activities serve as a catalyst to strengthen cultural communication in great depth,while others insist that the frequent interaction among
countries
deteriorate
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between residents of different nationalities. I am strongly in
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of developing connections through global
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.
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of all, cultures are composed of languages, traditions and customs, all of which would cease to exist if the soil to disseminate it is sterile.
That is
to say, the inner circulation of a certain culture within a country is not adequate for preservation.
For example
, So isolated are some indigenous tribes in Amazon rainforests that residents from mainstream
countries
barely acquaint with them at all. Most members from
such
ethnic groups have been struggling with survival, let alone handing over their unique cultures to young generations. In order to conserve their legacy passed down from ancestors, experts from all walks of life think up with various strategies
such
as the creation of tourism attractions and
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of natives to perform in other
countries
. Only in
this
way could these tribes attain sufficient attention from the outside to assist them in
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of culture with funds and human resources.
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, I believe some fundamental standards of moral and upright conduct are shared among varying nations. Even though conservatives is accustomed to
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frequent global
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for disputes or confrontations, appearing to be unavoidable during
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between two
countries
, it is vital to provide opportunities to bridge the discrepancy. A key solution is to increase chances for people to get familiar with their counterparts via tourism.
For instance
,a Japanese is likely to be considered as being rude by giving a bouquet of chrysanthemum as a gift in China since chrysanthemum is associated with death in
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culture.
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phenomenon of misunderstanding would be improved with the increasing mutual understanding of visitors. In conclusion, the expansion of international travel is a crucial component for mutual comprehension rather than intense conflicts arising
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