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Some people believe that showing big sporting events like the Olympics and the World Cup encourages adults to exercise. Others think there are better ways to make people to exercise. Discuss both sides and give your opinion. Give relevant examples,

#people #events #olympics #world #cup #adults #exercise
Dear Hiring manager My name is Maria Shved, and I'm applying
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L&D
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Content
 Curator in Namecheap. I am an experienced project manager in
education
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 field, and
last
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 3 years
i
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 have spent on
development
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 and improvement
educational
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 processes in LMS working together with
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 product owner,
also
 placing e-learning
content
,
managing
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 learners and stakeholders. And I understand how
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 educational
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 projects for thousands of users,
this
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this
 is what I would like to continue doing in your global developing company with an ambitious team. In
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 company, where I have been working, I created with the
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 and stakeholders a
catalog
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catalogue
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 of educational aggregated
content
, placing in
it
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 various types of
content
 from microlearning to
macrolearning
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microlearning
macro learning
, which allowed
to
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 build personal educational trajectories with AI recommendations. I
courated
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curated
 more than 20 integrations with international LMS platforms, coordinated
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developing
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own
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my own
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 LMS platform, managed the process of placing
online-courses
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,
led
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 webinars and blended, hybrid, and flipped courses. I worked with many universities,
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attracted hundreds of thousands of new students
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 platform and opened up the opportunity for lifelong learning by tracking their paths.
Also
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 of negotiations with stakeholders, clients, partners,
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 both technically and not,
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, marketing or c-level managers. In conclusion, I would like to continue the path of developing educational opportunities in
global
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 market with Namecheap, I believe my background provides the skills you require and I would welcome the opportunity for an in-depth interview. Please message me on contact mail to arrange a convenient date and time for us to meet. Thank you for your time and consideration. Sincerely, Maria Shved
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    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
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