Socail media is gradually repalcaing in person face to face coontact with many people worldwide.Do the benefits of social media outweight the disadvantage?
In recent years, there is a growing recognition of the popularity of social
media
apps
which is
replacing face-to-face interaction among many Correct subject-verb agreement
are
people
. This
essay will discuss Correct article usage
the advantage
advantage
and disadvantages of Fix the agreement mistake
advantages
this
issue.
On the one hand, it is obvious that there are many benefits significant when social media
apps
take place of face-to-face community in today's society. One of the major merits is that social media
apps
allow people
communicate
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to communicate
any
time, Change preposition
at any
that
means Humans do not need to be near the person there are talking to. Take Facebook as Correct pronoun usage
which
example
, Users can use Facebook messenger to communicate Add an article
an example
urgent
and Humans can joke throughout Change the word
urgently
on
group chat. Change preposition
apply
As a
result
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,result
people
can communicate with families very easy
. Another positive is need to mention is Change the word
easily
that
the quality of communication Correct word choice
apply
this
is mainly because Users can keep in touch with partners by video call, voice or simple messages depending on the situation. ,Correct pronoun usage
apply
Consequently
the geographical gap is narrow because of social Add a comma
,Consequently
media
communication.
On the other hand
, there are some shortcomings when using social media
apps
is omnipresence. The first
obvious demerit is that social media
is destroying in-person connection in the community because it is just a fake screen which is not able to transfer touching in reality. In other world, people
have few outdoor activities withAdd an article
a
friend
and direct interaction, Fix the agreement mistake
friends
the
result of Correct word choice
and the
this
is that people
do not like
hang out which lead to Add the particle
tolike
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decrease
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a decrese
decrese
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decrease
their
health. Another negative aspect is that modern couple Change preposition
in their
meeting
through Tinder and breaks up on social Wrong verb form
meet
media
apps
, thus
they do not go outside their home to interact. As a result
more and more the population is becoming isolated and lonely.
In conclusion, nowadays people
speak direct interaction less than over today. For me advantages outweigh the disadvantages, Humans should try to find a balance between communicating by
social Change preposition
via
media
and talk
face-to-face.Replace the word
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