Many countries believe international tourism has harmful effects. Why do they think so? What can be done to change their views?

Not every country do approve that
the
Correct article usage
apply
show examples
international
tourism
has a positive impact on their countries. There is a variety of reasons why they consider the negative influence on international
tourism
.
Moreover
, we can take steps to change their views. On the one hand, international
tourism
is more likely to affect local environments.
Tourists
who do not have good manners may damage
environment
Add an article
the environment
show examples
.
For example
, some visitors from other countries believe
thatthey
Correct your spelling
that they
who are far away from
the
Correct article usage
apply
show examples
tourist attractions should leave their marks in those places. So relics are carved by these people.
Moreover
, sometimes
governments
in order to
attracting
Change the verb
attract
show examples
more
tourists
all
Change preposition
from all
show examples
over the world would destruct
environment
Correct article usage
the environment
show examples
to establish artificial scenic spots
to
Fix the infinitive
apply
show examples
offer
such
as amusement parks,
theme
Correct word choice
and theme
show examples
parks. Even though the behaviour
are
Change the verb form
is
show examples
likely to help
governments
to increase their revenue, the
environment
would be destroyed by no matter
tourists
or
governments
.
Besides
, in terms of international
tourism
, perhaps
governments
construct creative tourist
attraction
Fix the agreement mistake
attractions
show examples
for visitors’ tastes
instead
of
original
Correct article usage
the original
show examples
local culture.
Governments
and
tourists
are able to take some measures to change some countries’ ideas.
Firstly
, the government should remind
tourists
to preserve
environment
Add an article
the environment
show examples
and arrange
staff
Change preposition
for staff
show examples
to restrain and supervise visitors to destroy scenic spots.
Secondly
,
tourism
resources should be effectively developed, meanwhile
governments
should protect original nature and culture.
Finally
, announcing a decrease in
negative
Add an article
a negative
show examples
influence on international
tourism
, including maintaining nature, local
environment
and culture, would be better announced by social media or the press. In conclusion, there are a few reasons that some nations believe that international
tourism
has disadvantages. So whoever needs to do something to change that view.
Submitted by litahlia0 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

Learn how to write high-scoring essays with powerful words.
Download Free PDF and start improving you writing skills today!
What to do next:
Look at other essays: