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Some people suggest that international news should study as a subject in secondary school. However, others say that it will be a waste of valuable school time. Discuss both views and give your opinion

#people #news #study #school #waste #time
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decisions
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 updates and events that occur daily are likely to be get affected by other countries. While some adults suggest that, studying international
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subject
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, others argue that it might waste
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time
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 that can be allocated to study some other important
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. Even though am convinced that international
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 is quite the
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 that supports
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kids
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 to get awareness about the real
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 around them, I am
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 essay to make a discussion about the topic. Wars, epidemics, export/import rules, and regulations are some of the critically important events happening around the
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 daily. Even if some
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subjects
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kids
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 knowledge about international affairs and what
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world
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 is currently going through,
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 could not expose them to the actual picture and the up-to-date situation
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 they start to discover after passing out from
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. Getting to know about other countries and what happens in the other part of the
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 would definitely
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broaden
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broaden
 the way children think about the
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 as it
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guide
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 them to explore and dive deeper into information. A separate
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 for international
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 is not just talking about
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 excellent way of exposing those fresh minds to
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 new set of information. History and geography are some of the
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subjects
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 that would allow pupils to study about the
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, resulting give more awareness and deep understanding
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 other countries. Teaching
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 like information technology and science are more likely to build up a
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 career growth than a
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 where
kids
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 just have to study
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, schools
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 hunches of broad
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 as schools have
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 limits which again it is a
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kids
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 responsibility to utilize the free
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child's
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 perception
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 the
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 could build up to match
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the reality of the
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 in their early stage by teaching them a simple
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 like international
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. Which I think will not only expand
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 position of the
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emotions
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emotions
 about people who are suffering somewhere in the
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. Though
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time
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 is limited in schools, I suppose the best style of educating a child is by allowing them to see
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reality and learn by putting those fresh brains to critically think about situations.
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