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Some people think that buildings such as flats and houses should be designed to last a long time. Others believe that it is more important to provide accommodation quickly and cheaply. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowladge or experiance

#people #buildings #flats #houses #time #accommodation #knowladge #experiance
Let me tell you about my recent - Sasha. I have known him for
year
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 and a half. I would like to highlight 3
his
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 main features. 1. Sasha is a very easy-going person,
pure
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 extrovert . After an hour
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we got to know each other, it seemed that we were friends for years. He can start a conversation with anyone easily and he
also
prefer
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 to keep the conversation going in any situation , so he is
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very talkative . 2. Sasha is a well-read and erudite in many fields, particularly in building, politics, finance, geography and history. As he always specs were
confidently
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,
everybody
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 believe him. But , in vain! He makes mistakes very often, but not from evil. I suppose that subconsciously he got used to
be
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 a person who knows everything and his brain prone to think out when there is a lack of information. 3. In spite of the fact that he is well-off and holds a leadership position in his company, he is not arrogant and cynic, but
on the contrary
 - modest and empathic
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