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Some people think that physical strength is important for success in sport, while other people think that mental strength is more important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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We all live lives that are mostly about balancing our personal lives.When it comes to personal life, it depends on how we treat our family and friends. being able to take care of our mental
health
 and
our
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physical
health
 is just as important as eating, sleeping or drinking water, both are very important. What things can affect our mental
health
? the most important thing is the stress we have every day and the form how we can face our
problems
 because if we don't know how to take them forward our mental
health
 will drop a lot bringing
problems
such
 as suicide, depression or addiction
problems
such
 as taking drugs, smoking or drinking alcohol
this
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 will bring physical
problems
such
 as obesity, anorexia or can bring diseases in general. In order to avoid all
this
 we have to have a good
habit
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 in our lives, especially in our diet and the organization of our daily duties so as not to overload or stress ourselves, which is what many of us do, for
this
reason
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 most of the people have mental
problems
 or physical
problems
 which is something serious and the help of a specialist is needed to guide us on the right way. I personally think that we must be very careful in all these aspects so as not to fall into any of these diseases and lead a full life with happiness and without anguish, enjoying everything we like without worrying about any problem.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • physical conditioning
  • athleticism
  • physical training
  • muscle strength
  • mental resilience
  • psychological preparedness
  • mental toughness
  • confidence
  • precision
  • focus
  • mental strategies
  • mental fortitude
  • brute strength
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