Some people think that physical strength is important for success in sport, while other people think that mental strength is more important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

We all live lives that are mostly about balancing our personal lives.When it comes to personal life, it depends on how we treat our family and friends. being able to take care of our mental

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physical

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is just as important as eating, sleeping or drinking water, both are very important. What things can affect our mental

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? the most important thing is the stress we have every day and the form how we can face our

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because if we don't know how to take them forward our mental

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will drop a lot bringing

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as suicide, depression or addiction

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as taking drugs, smoking or drinking alcohol

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will bring physical

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as obesity, anorexia or can bring diseases in general. In order to avoid all

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we have to have a good

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in our lives, especially in our diet and the organization of our daily duties so as not to overload or stress ourselves, which is what many of us do, for

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most of the people have mental

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or physical

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which is something serious and the help of a specialist is needed to guide us on the right way. I personally think that we must be very careful in all these aspects so as not to fall into any of these diseases and lead a full life with happiness and without anguish, enjoying everything we like without worrying about any problem.