Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara dessert or the Antartic. What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?
Tourism is the flow of people from one place to another to explore and experience new
places
and Use synonyms
culture
. Nowadays, many travellers prefer to visit Fix the agreement mistake
cultures
places
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that
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is
hard to reach, which in turn gives them more pleasure and excitement. Change the verb form
are
However
, many hardships Linking Words
such
as unfriendly weather conditions, Linking Words
scarcity
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and scarcity
in
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of
resources
might be faced during travel time. Use synonyms
This
essay articulates both advantages and Linking Words
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disadvantages
diadvantages
in detail as follows.
In today's world, most Correct your spelling
disadvantages
of
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apply
the
sightseers Correct article usage
apply
fond
of travelling to adventurous Add a missing verb
are fond
locations
. One of the reasons for Use synonyms
such
visits is that it makes them more proud and happy since it is less explored by Linking Words
public
. Add an article
the public
In addition
to that facing hurdles to reach Linking Words
the
destination helps them to become strong and it Change the word
their
contribute
much to their characteristics as well. Change the verb form
contributes
For example
, people travelling to cold and hilly Linking Words
places
like Use synonyms
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Himalaya
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the himalaya
himalaya
may cause altitude problems Correct your spelling
himalayas
such
as severe Linking Words
headache
and fatigue. Fix the agreement mistake
headaches
Moreover
, there is Linking Words
less source
of Fix the agreement mistake
fewer sources
resources
and essential items in these Use synonyms
locations
.
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On the other hand
, travelling to Linking Words
places
like Use synonyms
Sahara
desert, Correct article usage
the Sahara
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Antarctica
Antartica
may cause many difficulties. Correct word choice
and Antartica
Firstly
weather conditions in these Linking Words
places
are extreme, either too hot or too cold. Use synonyms
This
may affect the health condition of the passenger. Linking Words
For example
, people travelling to cold and hilly Linking Words
places
like Use synonyms
Change the capitalization
Himalaya
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the himalaya
himalaya
may cause altitude problems Correct your spelling
himalayas
such
as severe Linking Words
headache
and fatigue. Fix the agreement mistake
headaches
Moreover
, there is Linking Words
less source
of Fix the agreement mistake
fewer sources
resources
and essential items in these Use synonyms
locations
.
To conclude, sightseeing Use synonyms
to
difficult Change preposition
in
places
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is
indeed Unnecessary verb
apply
give
happiness and excitement, but certain factors Correct subject-verb agreement
gives
such
as climate, Linking Words
lack
of adequate Correct word choice
and lack
resources
may affect Use synonyms
the
travel. So we need to take care Correct article usage
apply
all
aspects before travelling to Change preposition
of all
such
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locations
.Use synonyms
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...