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The plans show the current site map of an airport and how it will look after undergoing some upgrades. Looking at the location outline before development, we can see that there are only eight gates. The number is to be raised to eighteen after the development process.
Also
, the walkway which can be seen on the current site map will be upgraded to a sky train in the future. If we take a closer look at the future site map, we can see that new facilities are to be added to the airport. A bag drop area is added in the departure
hall
. An ATM machine and a car hire office are added in the arrival
hall
. There will be two cafés, one in each
hall
instead
 of only one café in the departure
hall
 in the old design. Shops, or what seems to be a free zone are to be added in the new design too.
Lastly
, we can
also
 see that new doors will be added to both halls. These developments and upgrades will increase the capacity of the airport and enhance the services provided throughout its facilities.
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