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Some people feel that learning a foreign language is an essential component of a child’s education. Others feel that learning a foreign language is often a waste of time that can be better spent on learning about technology and other more vocational subjects. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Throughout the history of education, learning a foreign
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 has been a constant component. Of course, many
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 feel that
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 is really an unnecessary part of education for everyone, but
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 is not a point of view that I share. The opponents to learning a foreign
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 might argue that most
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 do not travel that often outside their own country.
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, out of all the countries of the world, comparatively not many share the same
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, learning a foreign
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 will only be useful for the very limited
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 spent in the country where it is used.
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, for some
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, the
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 might never be used in their entire lives. When thinking about how much
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 and money are spent training
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 teachers, buying resources, going on trips and delivering lessons for
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 a negligible benefit,
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 would seem to be a very inefficient allocation of resources.
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, the benefits of learning a foreign
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 go
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 than just the ability to use it from
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 to
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 on a holiday or business trip. To illustrate
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, through learning one
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, one gains an understanding to some extent of how all languages work.
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, no matter where
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 might end up around the world, the knowledge of
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 can be of use.
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, with the study of a foreign
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, one
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 opens oneself up to other cultures.
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 allows in turn an appreciation for different points of view and belief systems. With an ever-shrinking world due to globalisation, the ability to empathise and understand
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 from other countries is vital to reducing conflict and creating a more tolerant society.
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, quite simply learning languages is excellent for the improvement of general cognitive skills. In conclusion, it seems to me that learning a foreign
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, is more than just gaining the ability to speak a few words of a foreign tongue. It is part of intellectual and social development and needs to be continued for everyone in today’s schools.
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