A festival takes place in your town every year , The festival manager has asked for people to help with this year’s festival . You would like to help : Write a letter to the festival manager , in your letter * Give your opinion of last year’s festival * ⁠Say what you could do to help with this year’s festival * ⁠Ask some questions about the festival

Dear Sir/Madam, I hope

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letter finds you well.

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festival was truly commendable, especially the community talent segment, which beautifully showcased local creativity and passion. The event not only entertained but

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fostered a strong sense of unity and pride within our town. For

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programme, I would like to propose the introduction of a “Local Heritage and Oral History” corner.

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space could allow long-time residents, historians, or even elders from the community to share lesser-known stories, folklore, or historical anecdotes about our town. It would serve both as a cultural preservation effort and a way to engage younger generations in appreciating their roots. If

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idea aligns with your vision, I would be happy to assist in gathering speakers or curating content. Could you kindly inform me of

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festival theme and whether there is space in the programme for heritage-related contributions? Thank you for continuing to create

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a meaningful platform. I would be honoured to offer my help in making

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event equally impactful. Yours sincerely,

Priyanka

Aug 2, 2025

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coherence and cohesion

Your letter has a clear structure with a good greeting and closing. Keep this organization in all your writing.

task achievement

You addressed all points in the task very well. Keep including personal insights to make your writing more engaging.

task achievement

You provided a thoughtful suggestion for the festival, showing your creativity and community spirit.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

175 words

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