You visit a cafe every day. Write a letter to the manager of the cafe. In your letter - Say what you like about the cafe - Suggest an improvement to the cafe - Explain the benefits of your suggestion.

Dear Sir or Madam, Hope

this

letter finds you well. I am Laila Khaled, and I am one of the regular customers of your reputable cafe. I am writing

this

letter to express my deepest satisfaction and admiration regarding the service in the Sunset Cafe which is located near the Southern Station. The

first

thing I would like to raise is the strong points. As a matter of fact, the thing that I like the most in that cafe is the music corner because there not only am I able to concentrate, but

also

I enjoy long conversations with my friends. Another point I forgot to mention is areas of improvement. Despite the fact that

this

is my favourite cafeteria, I believe that it needs a better lighting system because sometimes we cannot study

as a result

of poor lighting. One

last

thing I want to discuss with you is that

this

development will pour in the benefit of a better atmosphere.

In other words

, visitors will enjoy more comfort and relaxation.

Subsequently

, the number of clients will dramatically increase. Looking forward to reading

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your reply about what actions you intended to take. Should there be any queries, kindly feel free to contact me

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Faithfully, Laila Khaled