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Some people think that keeping pets is good for children while others think it is dangerous and unhealthy for them. Which viewpoint do you agree with?

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Many of us
are
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very much like to have lovely
pets
 in our houses.
However
 while many people see their
children
 with
pets
 as a good thing, some are reluctant due to issues related to
health
 and risk. I believe keeping
pets
 with
children
 have more benefits for kids than
otherwise
 while closely monitoring the condition of the
pets
. It is common to see, most kids love to own a pet
for
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them
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. It helps them to learn and understand very important life lessons
such
 as love, sharing, caring, responsibility etc. As an example, if a little kid is given a puppy or kitten and its responsibility, he could learn many important things while feeding and maintaining it. Those kinds of experiences are very valuable for the life and unable to learn from books or from a
third
 party.
On the other hand
, of
course
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 it could be dangerous and unhealthy in some cases. Let's say the pet is
at
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sick often, it could have severe impacts on the
health
 of kids as well.
Moreover
, even a simple bite from a pet could lead to extreme repercussions.
Hence
 those factors should be closely monitored by adults and intervened immediately to enhance the quality of animals and the relationship between
children
. In summary, many believe
pets
 are good for
children
 while some are not due to
health
 and danger.
However
, I believe keeping
pets
 with
children
 has numerous advantages while paying continuous and close attention to the
health
 and behaviour of the animal.
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