Some schools start teaching a foreign language in primary school years. Do the advantages of teaching foreign languages to young children outweigh its disadvantages?

There is some argument about
children
who are learning
foreign
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language
in primary school is
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why the others opt for the opposite.
However
,
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my opinion, some advantages could outweigh the drawbacks.
Firstly
, it is notorious for people learning
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tongue
language
in schools,
this
may lead to
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confusion for
children
who needs to study both
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languages
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beside
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many other
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.More
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, to be professional at
language
needs much time and
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people who study them are
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hard-working
man
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.
Finally
,
this
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students who have
a problems
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a problem
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about
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mental health might
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feel
difficult to access
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new things from school.Chinese students not only study their
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language's
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alphabets but
also
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this
could be
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evidence as a good example of the opinion.
On the other hand
, I believe that the advantages could outweigh the issue. Speaking 2 or more
language
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languages
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could help
children
deal with the problem not only in their schoolwork but
also
in their future including job
application
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applications
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.
Furthermore
, learning more languages at an early can
also
mean saving time,people studying
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foreign
foreing
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foreign
languages can use their time on practicing more things.
Therefore
,learning
foreign
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at a young age could be more easily than we think,some studies approved
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pointed
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.
Finally
,
children
may
interested
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in studying while adding some story about that foreign
language
. In conclusion, the advantages of starting to teach a foreign
language
in primary school years totally outweigh the disadvantages.
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
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  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

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  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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