You have seen an advertisement from a couple, who live in Australia, for someone to teach their two children your language for a year. Write a letter to the couple. In your letter explain why you think you would be suitable for the job say what else you could do for the family give reasons for wanting the job

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Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Joy Kim, and I just read your advertisement in the newspaper yesterday that you are looking for a person who can teach Vietnamese to your children. I am writing
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letter to let you know that I am ready to help you. I would be the person you are looking for. There are several reasons why you need to hire me.
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, I have lived in Vietnam for more than twenty-two years.
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is my mother's language, and it will be easy for me to teach your kids.
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, right now I am a student at Sydney University, and my major is journalism, so I think I will have a deep knowledge of my language to make sure I can teach it correctly.
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, I can play some musical instruments like the piano and guitar, and I can show them how to play if you want. As you know, playing musical instruments in
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time can help your kids stay away from spending time playing video games.
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that, your address is located near my house, and it takes about 7 minutes to get there. I am very interested in
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job because I am in a gap year and I think I will have plenty of free time, so I want to find a part-time job to earn extra income. I appreciate you giving me the opportunity to help you. I'm waiting for your reply. Yours faithfully Joy Kim
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • TESOL certification
  • Experience in teaching children
  • Knowledge of Australian culture
  • Passion for language education
  • Flexible and adaptable
  • Design customized lesson plans
  • Patient and understanding
  • Strong communication skills
  • Interpersonal skills
  • Participate in family activities
  • Enthusiasm for cultural exchange
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