Some people say that using animals to test new products for human consumption should be banned in all countries. To what extent do you agree? Give clear arguments and examples to state your stance.
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medicines
medicins
and other products always Correct your spelling
medicines
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use
animals
experiment
in many countries before they are used for human
. While I tend forward the viewpoint that using Fix the agreement mistake
humans
animals
testing is wrong Change the noun form
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ethical perspective, I would have to agree that these experimentations for Correct your spelling
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medicines
medicins
are helpful for human life.
On one hand, some people suppose that using Correct your spelling
medicines
animals
for testing new products are
morally wrong. Change the verb form
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: people use
laboratory mice to try a new drug, it may be given an illness to be sure that the medicine is work
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agree
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argue
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that the
creatures
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believe
belive
that the benefits of humans should not Correct your spelling
believe
based
on the suffering of the Change the verb form
be based
animals
and scientists
should Correct word choice
that scientists
use
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alternative
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alternative
way
to Fix the agreement mistake
ways
experiment
.
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, the
alternative ways of experimentation are not always available. The supporter of using Correct article usage
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animals
for testing suppose that,
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apply
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and mice to Fix the agreement mistake
rats
experiment
is reasonable because the results of this
research can save human lives. There are many vacxins
, drugs … for humans Correct your spelling
vaccines
are
developed through the Correct pronoun usage
that are
use
of animals
experiment
. The opponents should reconsider if their family member needed a medical Correct your spelling
treatment
treament
that has been developed using animal Correct your spelling
treatment
experiment
. I personally agree with the banning of using Fix the agreement mistake
experiments
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the animal
an animal
animal
for testing non-medical products but I think it is Fix the agreement mistake
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necessary
use
this
method for the
important medical testing.
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to me that Change the verb form
seems
the
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medical research should not be Replace the word
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