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You have just read an article in a national newspaper which claims that town centres in your country all look very similar to each other. You don't fully agree with this opinion.

#article #newspaper #claims #town #centres #country #look
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Mr.
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 Mark I am writing a letter with regard to your article about
that
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town
centers
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 in Saudi Arabia sharing a quite level of similarities. I have been doing tours in Jeddah for a long time and I like reading about
towns
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centers
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 since these
the
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 most interesting places I do tours at . Concerning that, I totally support your point of view that these
centers
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 have profoundly the same interior design. I believe the reason lies behind
this
 identical style is that the developer company deals with the same interior designer for all the
centers
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, which to some extent is not a positive feature.
Moreover
, the high ceiling, arrangement of shops and green plants all over the
place
 give the feeling of lacking distinction and you could barely recognize which
center
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 you are in, and
this backups
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 your view about lacking “Uniqueness”, Alnakeel
center
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 is one of the wonderful
centers
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 in my
place
. It is a way different from all the
centers
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 that I have been to. An
opened
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 ceiling is an outstanding feature that makes it unique and extraordinary.
For instance
, the food court has been developed recently and many well-known
cafe
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 has joined the
place
 which
make
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a
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perfect
place
 for family and friends to meet and chat.
However
, if your schedule fits a quick visit to Jeddah, I would be thrilled and delighted to invite you to join our tour where we will discover the new places in town. Luckily,
next
 weekend marks the opening of the new luxurious cinema and we are planning to make it
as
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our
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first
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of
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 our tour. Looking forward
for
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 your visit where we can explore Jeddah together. Best Regards, Maha Aldosari
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