In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In the
last
years, printed
news
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paper
and
books
was
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used
like
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sources of
information
, but all
things
are
changes
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when
time
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will go and today, nobody will buy printed
news
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newspaper
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paper
and
books
because many
people
have
online
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the online
an online
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type of
this
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things
which makes
it
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free and open for all. After many years
people
will forget
a printed
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printed books
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books
and
news
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newspaper
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paper
.
Firstly
, all
books
have
online
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version
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versions
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in
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on
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internet
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the internet
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.
Fast
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internet
made many
things
easy to find and today all
people
can surf all
things
which they want and when it wants. To find
information
in
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printed sources,
people
must go to nearly library or
news
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newspaper
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paper
shop and they will
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their money and time to get
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the source
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source
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. But they are not completely sure that they can find
information
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the information
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which they want.
Internet
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The Internet
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made
this
task easier.
Secondly
, all
news
companies are made
migration
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the migration
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from print to online. To print
paper
companies must
spent
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spend
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many
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money
to
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on
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printer
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and
color
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for
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it and
this
task
eat
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many
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much
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money.
In
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internet
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,internet
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companies will only pay to write
information
. After writing they will
sent
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send
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it to
internet
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the internet
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which is free for all All in all, printed
books
and
news
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newspaper
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paper
will lose their readers in future
,
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because
internet
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the internet
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has changed many
things
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessibility
  • convenience
  • cost-effective
  • cultural value
  • sentimental value
  • reliability
  • distracting
  • access to
  • digital devices
  • internet
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