Human activities have led negative effects on plant and animals all over the world. Some people think it is too late to do something about it. Others think there is still some time to take actions. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Extinction of different

type

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of fauna and flora is often considered as the most urgent environmental

problems

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problem

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that we have to deal with nowadays.

Although

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, some people could

be disagree

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disagree

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because

there

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they

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are more pressing with other things. I totally agree that

extinction

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the extinction

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of

species

is a very serious

problem

, but

also

I believe that global warming is a more crucial situation that we have to deal with. On one hand, the disappearance of some

species

has been increasing over the years

as a result

from

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human activities,

such

as deforestation or

also

illegal hunting.

This

is a big

problem

for some countries because these

species

have a cultural significance.

Moreover

, the disappearance of the

species

will be

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of

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the loss of biodiversity and ecosystem.

On the other hand

, I have been Reading and listening about

this

problem

. Recently, global warming

for example

,

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is described

with

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increasing

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amount of carbon monoxide in the atmosphere and the result will be

increase

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an increase

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of

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temperature and sea levels. Pollution is

also

increasing and is one of the biggest

problem

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problems

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around the world because

the

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poor air quality has harmful effects on human health, particularly in

respiratory

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the respiratory

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system and cardiovascular

system

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systems

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.

Also

, can

be

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damage plants and animals like us.

To sum up

, I

am totally agree

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that the extinction of

species

must be prioritized.

However

, the experts believe

that is

most important the temperature and sea levels.

Furthermore

, humans

we

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have to save the environment and help them to have more control

about

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it,

otherwise

it will be even worse.