Human activities have led negative effects on plant and animals all over the world. Some people think it is too late to do something about it. Others think there is still some time to take actions. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Extinction of different

type

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of fauna and flora is often considered as the most urgent environmental

problems

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problem

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that we have to deal with nowadays.

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, some people could

be disagree

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because

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are more pressing with other things. I totally agree that

extinction

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the extinction

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of

species

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is a very serious

problem

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, but

also

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I believe that global warming is a more crucial situation that we have to deal with. On one hand, the disappearance of some

species

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has been increasing over the years

as a result

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from

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human activities,

such

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as deforestation or

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illegal hunting.

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is a big

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for some countries because these

species

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have a cultural significance.

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, the disappearance of the

species

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will be

follow

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of

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the loss of biodiversity and ecosystem.

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, I have been Reading and listening about

this

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problem

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. Recently, global warming

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,

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is described

with

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increasing

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amount of carbon monoxide in the atmosphere and the result will be

increase

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an increase

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of

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temperature and sea levels. Pollution is

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increasing and is one of the biggest

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problem

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around the world because

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poor air quality has harmful effects on human health, particularly in

respiratory

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the respiratory

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system and cardiovascular

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systems

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.

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, can

be

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damage plants and animals like us.

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, I

am totally agree

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that the extinction of

species

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must be prioritized.

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, the experts believe

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most important the temperature and sea levels.

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, humans

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have to save the environment and help them to have more control

about

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over

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it,

otherwise

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it will be even worse.