Human activities have led negative effects on plant and animals all over the world. Some people think it is too late to do something about it. Others think there is still some time to take actions. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Extinction of different
type
of fauna and flora is often considered as the most urgent environmental Fix the agreement mistake
types
problems
that we have to deal with nowadays. Fix the agreement mistake
problem
Although
, some people could Correct word choice
However
be disagree
because Change the verb form
disagree
there
are more pressing with other things. I totally agree that Correct pronoun usage
they
extinction
of Correct article usage
the extinction
species
is a very serious problem
, but also
I believe that global warming is a more crucial situation that we have to deal with. On one hand, the disappearance of some species
has been increasing over the years as a result
from
human activities, Change preposition
of
such
as deforestation or also
illegal hunting. This
is a big problem
for some countries because these species
have a cultural significance. Moreover
, the disappearance of the species
will be follow
Wrong verb form
followed
of
the loss of biodiversity and ecosystem. Change preposition
by
On the other hand
, I have been Reading and listening about this
problem
. Recently, global warming for example
, which
is described Correct pronoun usage
apply
with
Change preposition
by
increasing
amount of carbon monoxide in the atmosphere and the result will be Add an article
an increasing
the increasing
increase
Add an article
an increase
the increase
of
temperature and sea levels. Pollution is Change preposition
in
also
increasing and is one of the biggest problem
around the world because Change to a plural noun
problems
the
poor air quality has harmful effects on human health, particularly in Correct article usage
apply
respiratory
system and cardiovascular Add an article
the respiratory
system
. Fix the agreement mistake
systems
Also
, can be
damage plants and animals like us. Unnecessary verb
apply
To sum up
, I am totally agree
that the extinction of Change the verb form
totally agree
species
must be prioritized. However
, the experts believe that is
most important the temperature and sea levels. Furthermore
, humans we
have to save the environment and help them to have more control Correct pronoun usage
apply
about
it, Change preposition
over
otherwise
it will be even worse.Submitted by maiterechegr on
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