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Some people think that buildings such as flats and houses should be designed to last a long time. Others believe that it is more important to provide accommodation quickly and cheaply. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowladge or experiance

#people #buildings #flats #houses #time #accommodation #knowladge #experiance
1)A few years ago
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 was invited to a book club and met my future best friend Diana. Diana is the person who will make you feel comfortable around her and you won’t be able to stop talking about everything in the world. She charms everyone with her energy, but nobody minds. 2) When
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 was studying in middle school
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 had a classmate named Andrew. A scrawny short boy, who was a complete snob. He judged people by their knowledge of
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 himself perfect. He was a bit of a pain. every time
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 made a mistake in class, he immediately hurried to correct me in front of the whole class. 3) My teacher is
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 principled person. He believes that everyone should treat others as equals.
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 he always gives fair marks and helps to correct mistakes.
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